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          Every coin has two side, when some people believe that using PEDs is bad because it hurt athlete’s health and also because it is a kind of cheating, some athlete still use PEDs to win. Another group of people consider cheating athlete should face a high fines to rewards clean athletes who does not use PEDs drugs and to pay for the drug test. Many athletes reduced their careers and retired early because they use PEDs blindly. In another words, many athletes do not know risks of using PEDS for their bodies and careers. As Goodman (2012) says, “We must include athletes in this debate, and educate them about risks.” Instead of focusing solely on the fairness of the game or the spirit of the sport, we should pay more attention to the athletes’ education about the risks of using PEDs and the health of the athletes. However, some athletes are so eager to win that they take all the risks and use PEDs. Rewarding clean athletes is an important way to motivate athletes not to use PEDs and cheating athletes should face big fines to pay for the drug test and the Reward for clean athletes. As Bradbury explains “Instead of focusing on just the cheating athletes, we should do something to reward the clean ones and give athletes an incentive to abstain ” and “Instead, we should implement fines for positive drug tests that will be used to pay restitution to athletes who stay clean ”. In sport competitions, the rewards are great and the winner takes all the glory. In order to create a fair game environment, we should set up a strict system of rewards for clean athletes and punishments for cheating athletes. Risks education of using PEDS for athletes is also important.




References 
 Goodman, M(August 8, 2012, 12:32 Pm). Clean competition is safest. Room for Debate: New York Times. Retrieved, August 10, 2017.
Bradury, J.C(August 8, 2012, 9:52 Am). "Fine the dirty, reward the clean". Room for Debate:New York Times. Retrieved, August 10, 2017.





 

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