Summary of "Mr.Mom"
Yunzhe Li
RW613
12/07/2017
In the article “Mr. Mom”written by Tony Hicks, the author expatiates the beneficial aspects and difficult aspects of being a stay-at-home dad. He explains that more and more men like to be a stay-at-home dad because men can do better than women and get a better relationship with children. Even though there are many difficulties for “Mr. Mom”like too many housework and srtange looking of man playing with a child, many men insist on becoming a stay-at-home dad. The writer said that society is not ready to accept the stay-at-home dad, but he shows a opsitive attitude to this phenomenon.
RW613
12/07/2017
In the article “Mr. Mom”written by Tony Hicks, the author expatiates the beneficial aspects and difficult aspects of being a stay-at-home dad. He explains that more and more men like to be a stay-at-home dad because men can do better than women and get a better relationship with children. Even though there are many difficulties for “Mr. Mom”like too many housework and srtange looking of man playing with a child, many men insist on becoming a stay-at-home dad. The writer said that society is not ready to accept the stay-at-home dad, but he shows a opsitive attitude to this phenomenon.
Good work, but no comma after "even though". Review meaning of "expatiates". It doesn't really fit because this article is so short.
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