Thesis and Topic sentences



 Thesis：China and Japan have similarities in dining etiquette and differences in holidays and family structure.

Topic sentences
1.       Because both countries eat rice as a staple food and both use chopsticks, China and Japan have similar dining etiquette.
2.       China and Japan are in different dimensions to have different climates, so they have different holidays.
3.       China and Japan have different family structure because of different population.

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  1. Language TrainerAugust 4, 2017 at 8:27 AM

    Please follow the format that we reviewed for topic sentences. These are details/examples and do not need to be included: "eat rice as a staple food and both use chopstick", "dimensions to have different climates", and "f different population." 75

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